Wednesday, October 20, 2021

my skateboard ramp.

 

Today I was learning to re write my story.

I enjoyed reading the story.

I found it challenging to re write it.

My digital learning object shows my skateboard ramp.

Next time I would change my font and add more writting.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Noah,
    My name is Matua Whitu and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    Positive: The colours you have picked for your post are awesome!
    Helpful: Next time, lets add some more details or key points about your recount.
    Thoughtful: Being able to ride the skate ramp in a wheelchair is a pretty gnarly stunt.



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